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I’ve got this worldbuilding project where a big chunk of land is cordoned off. I’m not sure what’s inside. (lemmy.world)

submitted 1 year ago by [email protected] to c/[email protected]

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Vaguely poking at an alternate history type project where the USA fractured into multiple warring states in a multisided modern civil war.

Since I can’t help but inject some kind of weird horror elements I added “The Ohio Exclusion Zone”, an area roughly bordering Ohio that has been completely walled off. The wall is patrolled and watched. Whatever is beyond it is so serious that the warring states all agree the wall is off limits of the war.

I don’t know what is beyond it though. My first thought was skinwalkers. Shapeshifting weird spirits seems pretty ominous. Maybe instead f them, just a giant black orb hovering in Ohio and doing, something…

I don’t know. What weird paranormal thing would make the military patrol a border and is such a threat that enemies of that military agree the border is off limits in war.

(Yes I’m asking people to be creative for me…)

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[–] [email protected] 4 points 1 year ago

Almost at the top of the rope. You won't have long before a patrol spots you, but long enough to snap a picture and get out. You swing your legs over and look around.

The top of the wall exends into the morning haze in both directions. The view to the other side is blocked by a jumble of small huts, chimneys, floodlights; each one emblazoned with the logo of the Ohio Containment Corp - the block capitals OHIO enclosed in a möebus band. You pick your way through until you see what you came here for.

Disappointment. It's just the same scrubland, dusty tracks and fields that you drove through to get here. Maybe there's some settlements way off in the distance? It's hard to see. Oh well. What did you expect? The whole secret laid bare on your very first view? You snap a picture, and step forward for a better look.

What was that? You heard something! Is there someone else here? You dart back and crouch, out of sight you hope, and try to listen. If there was a guard they would surely have raised the alarm. You creep forward, quietly as you can, then .. shit! You see its shadow. Human shaped, crouched, moving slowly, stalking you.

You've gotta go. Where's the rope? You must have got turned around in the confusion but you find it. Swing over and back down. Hand over hand as fast as you dare. Your buddy Flip is still at the bottom where he parked the car.
"Whoa, slow down. You'll break your neck"
"Flip, we gotta go"
"Did you get the photo?"
"Yeah, but -"
He grins and raises his palm. You fumble the hi-five.
"Flip, someone saw me. We gotta go"
He looks up at the wall, sceptical, but nods. "Hey, are you driving?" He motions you towards the other door. You stumble around and climb in. What is wrong? Something is, you know it.
"Wow, you're really flustered about something. You'll feel better with some breakfast." He hands you a candy bar. You take a bite. It tastes .. not bad, but different. It's some knock-off Snickers bar with its label in a foreign alphabet. Flip starts the car and pulls out left, past the Containment Corp sign. You notice a misprint on the logo - it says OIHO.
"Flip, I don't think this is the way back"
"Sure it is - it's the same way we came here. You're really in a state. What happened to you up there?"

You don't know. You try to think. You try to reflect.