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My friend recorded herself singing Nicki Minaj at one of our New Years Party. I decided to remix it and see what I can come up with.

Because I am just starting out, the mix/mastering of this track is a bit of a disaster.

I guess I am just wondering how the arrangement of the track flows for someone that is hearing this for the first time.

Also, does it make you want to dance/party? or skip the song and get some actual Nicki to play?

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[–] [email protected] 2 points 1 year ago (1 children)

I like the flow of the track, nice job! My only note is the section at 0:50. I might try to improve that. Otherwise i was pumped to hear how good this was.

I’ve never heard the original but your remix did hold me captive, and i could easily imagine myself vibing to it if I wasn’t so tired right now lol

[–] [email protected] 1 points 1 year ago (1 children)

Thank you so much for the listen and feedback! it is greatly appreciated!

Here is the original if you ever wanted to check it out https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SeIJmciN8mo

What would you recommend to improve the breakdown section at 0:50? Is there too much going on? Not enough cow bell? lol

[–] [email protected] 1 points 1 year ago

Nah it isn’t that too much is going on. I feel that my ears need something dynamic to follow, but the section isn’t dynamic enough. for example, there is a synth pad on a slow crescendo, and it might be my speakers but I don’t think it’s prevalent enough, and it might not start early enough.

There just has to be a more prevalent element sort of “leading the charge” during those 8 bars. I hope that makes sense?

sorry for the long delay