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[–] [email protected] 12 points 7 months ago (1 children)

Norwegians facing a shortage as Easter nears are hoarding eggs from neighboring Sweden

We could phrase it more naturally like

Facing a shortage as Easter nears, Norwegians are hoarding eggs from neighboring Sweden

[–] [email protected] 6 points 7 months ago

It needs commas I think.

Norwegians, facing a shortage as Easter nears, are hoarding eggs from neighboring Sweden.