I really enjoyed that! I think the first section was the strongest to me personally -- it was more grounded in real events, while some of the other sections lost some of their power by becomming too abstract. I did enjoy the aspect of different interconnected characters setting up eachothers stories.
I went ahead and shared it in my solarpunk bookclub, hopefully some more people will give it a read through!
Also it might be worth crossposting to a solarpunk community, it really fits the vibe :)