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Hurling ordure at the TREACLES, especially those closely related to LessWrong.

AI-Industrial-Complex grift is fine as long as it sufficiently relates to the AI doom from the TREACLES. (Though TechTakes may be more suitable.)

This is sneer club, not debate club. Unless it's amusing debate.

[Especially don't debate the race scientists, if any sneak in - we ban and delete them as unsuitable for the server.]

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Yud on brevity being the soul of wit (nitter.net)

submitted 1 year ago* (last edited 1 year ago) by [email protected] to c/[email protected]

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Flashback time:

One of the most important and beneficial trainings I ever underwent as a young writer was trying to script a comic. I had to cut down all of my dialogue to fit into speech bubbles. I was staring closely at each sentence and striking out any word I could.

"But then I paid for Twitter!"

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[–] [email protected] 5 points 1 year ago (1 children)

everything else aside, why would you describe a bookshelf as stacked to the brim. what brim

[–] [email protected] 4 points 1 year ago* (last edited 1 year ago) (1 children)

The brim of the bookshelves' hat. You see, wizard bookshelves have hats formed like fedoras < ... insert 6,000 words of impromptu worldbuilding here ... >

[–] [email protected] 2 points 1 year ago (1 children)

AKCHUALLY these are muggle bookshelves

I didn't suffer through all these chapters wishing for the payoff that never lived just to let Dr. Verres get slandered with a possession worth being interested in.

[–] [email protected] 2 points 1 year ago

Whoops missed it was the second sentence, where I presume Hariezier has not actually arrived at Hogwarts. For some reason I assumed it was the interior of Dumbledore's study.