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Poetry

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A community to celebrate published and OC works of poetry.


Welcome to !poetry


Guidelines & Community Rules

In addition to the general rules of lemmy.world:

Published Poetry

1a: Poetry posts should include the title and the author, when the author is known.

O.C. Poetry

2a: Sharing original poetry is encouraged, but it must be preceded by the tag "[OC]."

2b: If an [OC] post is requesting feedback, it should also follow with the "[FB]" tag. It would look like the following example:
[OC] [FB] Nothing Gold Can Stay

Feedback

All feedback should be given in good faith.

3a: All [FB] requests should be met with comments constructive in nature. It is okay to dislike parts of a poem, but make sure to explain why you feel that way.

3b: Feedback does not need to be extraordinary in nature. Simply expressing how a work makes you feel is often enough.

3c: Use the honor system. When you receive good feedback, return it in kind to another author. Everyone appreciates knowing their work is being read and appreciated.

As this community develops, these guidelines may be adjusted.


Formatting Help
Work in progress

To create a line break, use two spaces at the end of a line.

To create empty space, type  . Use four of these at the beginning of a line to create a standard indent.

UPDATE:
Some methods of access do not format markdown correctly. I am currently testing various apps and web interfaces to see what does and does not retain formatting.

In the interim, it is encouraged to post text poetry as you normally would, but to include a link at the beginning or end of the post with access to a website or image that retains the formatting as intended.


Other Poetry Communities
Poetry lovers unite! In the style of the fediverse, multiple poetry communities have arisen, and will continue to rise. I will try to keep a list here of communities across instances that are worth checking out!


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I got ChatGPT to translate a poem I wrote in college.

ChatGPT Translation:

Tonight, I'll compose verses in your name,

Under a faint moon, where shadows play their game.

While you rest, enveloped in dreams' gentle hold,

Our love lies between what's real and stories told.

Tonight, I'll write for you in the endless deep,

Where wine's warmth and passions quietly seep.

In the haze of smoke, your essence seems to fade,

Between life's certainties and the illusions we've made.

OG:

Anh sẽ viết cho em một vần thơ

Giữa đêm nay vắng vẻ dưới trăng mờ

Đêm em ngủ êm đềm trên gối mộng

Khuya cuộc tình nữa thực lại nữa mơ

Anh sẽ viết cho em trong mênh mông

Giữa đêm nay hơi ấm rượu men nồng

Đêm khói thuốc bóng em bay mờ ảo

Khuya cuộc đời nữa có nữa lại không

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[–] [email protected] 2 points 1 year ago* (last edited 1 year ago) (1 children)

Nice work, whoever you originally wrote this for was quite lucky :P

[–] [email protected] 1 points 1 year ago

Unfortunately, we weren't a match. I loved her, but she's was very superficial. It was the uncertainty of our relationship that made me write it.