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Hey all, I'm working on an old western which has some native characters, predominantly of a fictional tribe. I'm wondering if you all think it would be understandable if people spoke (in dialogs only) as the times and used terms like "Indian" or, even worse, "Injun", or should I stick with using tribe names and the word "native"? Or something different altogether?

Thanks!

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[โ€“] [email protected] 6 points 1 year ago* (last edited 1 year ago) (1 children)

Fair question! My girlfriend tends to be angry with the stumbling efforts of new media to adopt language that does not dehumanize or denigrate Native culture.

However, she would understand how a particular setting demands that the characters be mostly limited to the ideas to which they would be predisposed.

It could be helpful to include an author's sidenote about your feelings and intentions when writing.

Personally, I think your racist characters can act racist without representing the artist. Censoring this (ugly) part of history affects the integrity of your setting, and the potential for conflict or character development.

Colonial attitudes towards "civilizing the uncivilized" were so pervasive that they still affect territorial politics to this day, among other things.

[โ€“] [email protected] 2 points 1 year ago

Thanks for the reply! I tend to agree with the philosophy that censoring the past isn't always a good thing. In this case, though, my understanding is that it wasn't only racists who used the term "Indian", but everyone did because they as a whole hadn't yet acknowledged that it was wrong or pejorative.

I think I'm going to leave it as "natives" or the specific tribe name unless the occasion really really calls for it and it would be nonsensical too not use it.

Thanks again!