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The words you are reading have not been produced by Generative AI. They're entirely my own.

The role of Generative AI

The only parts of what you're reading that Generative AI has played a role in are the punctuation and the paragraphs, as well as the headings.

Challenges for an academic

I have to write a lot for my job; I'm an academic, and I've been trying to find a way to make ChatGPT be useful for my work. Unfortunately, it's not really been useful at all. It's useless as a way to find references, except for the most common things, which I could just Google anyway. It's really bad within my field and just generates hallucinations about every topic I ask it about.

The limited utility in writing

The generative features are useful for creative applications, like playing Dungeons and Dragons, where accuracy isn't important. But when I'm writing a formal email to my boss or a student, the last thing I want is ChatGPT's pretty awful style, leading to all sorts of social awkwardness. So, I had more or less consigned ChatGPT to a dusty shelf of my digital life.

A glimmer of potential

However, it's a new technology, and I figured there must be something useful about it. Certainly, people have found it useful for summarising articles, and it isn't too bad for it. But for writing, that's not very useful. Summarising what you've already written after you've written it, while marginally helpful, doesn't actually help with the writing part.

The discovery of WhisperAI

However, I was messing around with the mobile application and noticed that it has a speech-to-text feature. It's not well signposted, and this feature isn't available on the web application at all, but it's not actually using your phone's built-in speech-to-text. Instead, it uses OpenAI's own speech-to-text called WhisperAI.

Harnessing the power of WhisperAI

WhisperAI can be broadly thought of as ChatGPT for speech-to-text. It's pretty good and can cope with people speaking quickly, as well as handling large pauses and awkwardness. I've used it to write this article, and this article isn't exactly short, and it only took me a few minutes.

The technique and its limitations

Now, the way you use this technique is pretty straightforward. You say to ChatGPT, "Hey, I'd like you to split the following text into paragraphs and don't change the content." It's really important you say that second part because otherwise, ChatGPT starts hallucinating about what you said, and it can become a bit of a problem. This is also an issue if you try putting in too much at once. I found I can get to about 10 minutes before ChatGPT either cuts off my content or starts hallucinating about what I actually said.

The efficiency of the method

But that's fine. Speaking for about 10 minutes straight about a topic is still around 1,200 words if you speak at 120 words per minute, as is relatively common. And this is much faster than writing by hand is. Typing, the average typing speed is about 40 words per minute. Usually, up to around 100 words per minute is not the strict upper limit but where you start getting diminishing returns with practice.

The reality of writing speed

However, I think we all know that writing, it's just not possible to write at 100 words per minute. It's much more common for us to write at speeds more like 20 words per minute. For myself, it's generally 14, or even less if it's a piece of serious technical work.

Unrivaled first draft generation

Admittedly, using ChatGPT as fancy dictation isn't really going to solve the problem of composing very exact sentences. However, as a way to generate a first draft, I think it's completely unrivaled. You can talk through what you want to write, outline the details, say some phrases that can act as placeholders for figures or equations, and there you go.

Revolutionizing the writing process

You have your first draft ready, and it makes it viable to actually do a draft of a really long report in under an hour, and then spend the rest of your time tightening up each of the sections with the bulk of the words already written for you and the structure already there. Admittedly, your mileage may vary.

A personal advantage

I do a lot of teaching and a lot of talking in my job, and I find that a lot easier. I'm also neurodivergent, so having a really short format helps, and being able to speak really helps me with my writing.

Seeking feedback

I'm really curious to see what people think of this article. I've endeavored not to edit it at all, so this is just the first draft of how it came out of my mouth. I really want to know how readable you think this is. Obviously, there might be some inaccuracies; please feel free to point them out where there are strange words. I'd love to hear if anyone is interested in trying this out for their work. I've only been messing around with this for a week, but honestly, it's been a game changer. I've suddenly looked to my colleagues like I'm some kind of super prolific writer, which isn't quite the case. Thanks for reading, and I'll look forward to hearing your thoughts.

(Edit after dictation/processing: the above is 898 words and took about 8min 30s to dictate ~105WPM.)

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[–] [email protected] 4 points 1 year ago (1 children)

probably a lot

one very big part of this is the executive-tier push for "AI". it's not because AI, it's purely social. "everyone else is doing it" and a lot of execs will literally fall over themselves to get something delivered in that manner. because they don't actually understand the thing in comparison to other shit.

I cite the way "the metaverse" bubbled and fizzed as my supporting datapoint here, along with n-many other bullshit hype cycles in the past

[–] [email protected] 5 points 1 year ago (2 children)

and "blockchain". Every now and then there's a writeup in the finance press of some company that is totally using blockchain to move real money around, and in 100% of cases i've looked into the blockchain bit gets relegated to logging or removed entirely while MSSQL, Oracle or Postgres do the work. Of course, it's still advertised as blockchain.

[–] [email protected] 4 points 1 year ago (1 children)

The weird thing about this is how the sales pitch for enterprise blockchain has not changed at all. Pick a presentation on YouTube from the last 6 months and I guarantee it will be identical to one from 5 years ago

[–] [email protected] 6 points 1 year ago

I dug into my draft scraps to find this bit I wrote about it. It was never published so when it continues to be true you have to trust my word that I wrote it on the 19th of February 2023.

A good example is to watch any presentation from the late 2010s about how the blockchain is going to change the food supply chain or some shit and it's going to help all these nondescript poor farmers who are being taken advantage of by these big corporations. They speak with a lot of passion and there is an undeniably strong sense that they believe the things they are saying. The problem becomes clear when you watch the second presentation. Pick one about blockchain in a different industry, say financial services, and you're likely to see the same template. Properties-the trust machine, immutability, decentralisation-followed by an emotionally charged story about a helpless individual in a spot of avoidable strife_-followed by an inconclusive conclusion which assumes you can clearly see how blockchain fixes it. A common characteristic of that emotionally charged story, I find, is that it describes a scenario that seems to point more to an incompetently managed process which somehow managed to forget that computers and the internet exists and attempts to run a cross-continent process with pencils, paper, and airmail. It's like a magician's act where the sleight of hand distracts you with blocks, chains, trust, and emotions so you forget to ask how the means of storing information makes any difference in the real world.

[–] [email protected] -2 points 1 year ago (3 children)

I'm old enough to remember this same line of argument about internet company hype. That everyone wanted a company as successful as Microsoft or yahoo and was throwing money into anything that had a .com. Of course, one of those was Amazon.com ...

It's possible for one field to be 100% a scam (blockchain, NFTs), while another field is 99% a scam (AI startups), and yet the 1% ends up creating a massive new sector of the economy that is richer than anything prior.

[–] [email protected] 4 points 1 year ago

I’m old enough to remember this same line of argument about internet company hype

you're extremely close to doing your dash on this fine server, cut this shit right now

[–] [email protected] 4 points 1 year ago (1 children)

It’s possible for one field to be 100% a scam (blockchain, NFTs), while another field is 99% a scam (AI startups), and yet the 1% ends up creating a massive new sector of the economy that is richer than anything prior.

again, it’s really weird that you seem to also be anti-cryptocurrency while not knowing that this is the exact reasoning used by some of the most self-harming problem gamblers in the cryptocurrency space — that all it’ll take is one unicorn to make everyone who bought in rich

[–] [email protected] 3 points 1 year ago

walking example of the lottery gambler's paradox - statistically you know it is vanishingly unlikely that you'll be winner, but maybe it could be you!! because our irrational squishy brainmeats are so goddamned easy to logic-hack, so the cycle continues

[–] [email protected] 2 points 1 year ago

also, honest question: have you previously lost a whole lot of money gambling on cryptocurrency?